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Reply Advertisement, October 19th, 2017, 2:51 pm

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Reply AngelicaAgelviz, September 27th, 2015, 9:27 am

Ive been reading the comic thus far, and its been very cute. But as a word of advice? Try to make your characters have more obvious differing characteristics, be it in facial features, face shape, body type, height, fashion etc. It was hard at times to distinguish between Ayase, Cho and Izumi. And while they do have different hairstyles, I worry that in close-ups they would be indistinguishablefrom each other. I understamd that style plays a big part in this, but challenging yourself to make each one their own individual might prove beneficial in the future. :) looking forward to more!

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